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An attempt at creative writing

I came across an attempt I made in the past at some creative writing, yes shocking me creative! Well I have looked at it and removed same obvious grammatical errors (unlike on here, I NEVER notice or remove them). Here we go I guess:

a killer

Down a dark ally a new killer is born
This killer with a bloody thirst
Only quenched by the death of a person

This person is some one unsuspecting of death
A happy person having the time of her life

The problem is that her happiness is about to be ended
By a veracious killing machine

The young woman who is about to be extinguished
The alcohol in her blood stream
Has lost all of her orientation

She has been separated from her friends for what seems an age
The only thing she can think of is getting home

He follows her down the bright and vibrant street
Hoping with anticipation that she will go under the dark underpass

As he walks behind her he gets more and more agitated
This will be his first kill

How did things get to this point?

Did he always know that he was going to kill?
Or could he have become something else

As they approach the underpass
The number of people around decreases
It is now at a point where it is just him and her

He gets closer and closer

She can feel his breath against her neck
It is now too late
He is too close to her

He thinks
He has a conscious
However this late show of human decency is too late

He is going to kill her

He pulls out a knife

On it reads stainless steel

He doesn’t believe it will stay stainless

It is obviously deadly

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